The ownership of a home is much more important in some countries for people than renting it. Although there are several possible reasons why these people are choosing to have their own home rather than renting it, I believe that this is a negative trend in financial and geographical terms for them.
One reason for having a place to live for people is more important than renting is that they might want to live in their own home where they can live freely. In other words, if people own a home, they can do everything there according to their interest, such as painting and decorating the walls without the permission of owners. Another reason is that this is due to the problems people have when they are living as a renter. Signing a contract, paying the bills and other financial activities, for example, take more money and time as well, which is always impossible to be solved without the owners, so more people simply choose to own a home than renting.
However, I believe that for people, owning a home rather than renting might be negative in some cases. One simple example is that according to financial perspective, people who want to own a home need to have more money than those who choose to rent because they have to have the house furnished by their budget. Another reason is that having a home can be a problem for the owner who lives near a dangerous area which is full of natural disasters like earthquake, which might result in losing their expensive homes as a result of the disasters. As
these factors people come across when they own a home, this can be negative for them.
In conclusion, while the ownership of a home is more important compared to renting for some
people owing to above possible reasons, I think that this can also be negative in some cases.
- The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 90
- The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- In some countries owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think it is a positive or negative situation 56
- Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career while others believe that it is to a job straight after school Discuss both views and give your opinion 100
- The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 100
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63322884013 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38828684901 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435736677116 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.4130210474 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.363636364 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2727272727 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381949387212 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188920562412 0.084324248473 224% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103870497152 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23896034061 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540960287452 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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