Television has had a significant influence on the culture of many society. To what extent would you say that television has a positively or negatively affected the culture development of your society.
Popularity of watching television is more and more increasing our world. some people think that television has had of consequent impact on the culture of many community.I tend to deem that prose of television on culture program in society outweigh its cons. I will shed light on the advantage and disadvantage of the given statement.
To begin with, there are ample benefit of television affected the culture development of society.the predominate advantages is live news.To be more precise with the help of television update news and information people can enhance their knowledge about world. For instance government organised 26 January program on television for people know about culture program. Another benefit is entertainment and education. Make it more clear while People can watch television program they reduce trees as well as people can spend time with their family. Moreover television education very helpful for children. For example now a days covid-19 situation is going on, while government organisation program on television also students learn with the help of education program.
on the other hand in spite of having many benefits of television has effect on society, it has a few drawbacks also the first is a fake news and violence. To elaborate sometime television media make fake news which people can believe that also television has a many time adopt foreign culture, while people can distract from their culture. In addition many crime program people encourage to commit to crimes. secondly is a health issue. More precise most of children close watch television, while there I problem on long time.
To sum up, old television has a effect culture of society like live news, entertainment, education program, according to me negative effect is a encourage to commit to violence, fake news, health issue in future.
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- Television has had a significant influence on the culture of many society To what extent would you say that television has a positively or negatively affected the culture development of your society 73
- Television has had a significant influence on the culture of many societies to what extent would you say that television has positively or negatively affected the culture development of your society 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, in spite of, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25423728814 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78790427148 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535593220339 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.9553384243 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0666666667 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23557036271 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786402478198 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819681967662 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16601383584 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611580351543 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.