The pictures illustrate the main changes that have taken place in the town of Kimsvilla since 2002.
Overall, it appears that Kimsvilla has become much more modern city, with more public facilities and skyscrapers.
In 2002, there was a shopping centre in the north of the city centre, and old cinema was situated in the south side of it. The city also included a factory which was taken place in the east, and far four side of the city used to remain as green area with trees.
Coming to now, one interesting change in Kimsvilla is that new train station has been built in the eastern side of the city centre. In addition the green spaces in the southwest is removed to make room for football stadium, and the trees which were situated west of the shopping centre have been cut down to make way for new accommodations. Another striking change is that the factory is replaced by software company and the building which was used as cinema has been turned into pub. However the shopping centre in the south of the city centre remained unchanged.
- The maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 60
- The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- In some countries owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think it is a positive or negative situation 56
- In some countries owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think it is a positive or negative situation 56
- The pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y which was taken place in the east, and far four side of the city used to remain...
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Suggestion: addition,
...the eastern side of the city centre. In addition the green spaces in the southwest is re...
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Suggestion:
...moved to make room for football stadium, and the trees which were situated west o...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...sed as cinema has been turned into pub. However the shopping centre in the south of t...
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Line 7, column 521, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... pub. However the shopping centre in the south of the city centre remained uncha...
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Suggestion:
...owever the shopping centre in the south of the city centre remained unchanged.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66129032258 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31957317231 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537634408602 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7174239693 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.375 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0604670695193 0.215688989381 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0295490407532 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401824026196 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0447990345369 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513040899137 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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