Some people think that cultural traditions are destroyed by increasing number of tourists, others believe that it helps to save traditions. discuss both points and give your opinion.
Many people believe that growing amounts of tourists can cause potential damage to the cultural tradtions of the host country. However, others refute this by empasizing the role of tourism to help traditions last longer. There are valid opinions on both sides which will be further discussed in this essay.
Every facet of the economy has a positive and negative impact with tourism not being any different. Even though tourism industry does not cause as much pollution to the atmosphere as cars and factories do, travellers might leave their ecological footprint which degrades the environment. Various disposable materials, carelessly thrown over the vast areas of hot spots, are very difficult to recycle and takes long time to biodegrade. Furthermore, if the visitors do not respect the culture of the locals, it can generate tension and sometimes cause disagreement.
On the other hand, tourists visiting the country can bring considerable benefits. International, as well as, local tourism is viewed as one of the factors to boost the economy. Tourists arriving the country spend money on accomodation and sightseeing which opens up new positions and reduces the unemployment rates. Additionally, the money generated from tourism can be used to restore ancient monuments and create more recreational places for the visitors along with local people. Lastly, tourism plays a pivotal role in spreading the prominance of the cultures and their languages. Visitors always tend to get curious about acquiring local languages and learning more about the local traditions.
To conclude, tourism might have some negative effects to the local country in terms of environmental pollutants and dispute with locals. However, overall benefits will outweigh its disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... tourism is viewed as one of the factors to boost the economy. Tourists arriving ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, lastly, so, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50915750916 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85159130044 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655677655678 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1712057196 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.266666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12030441192 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395023160386 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503859389397 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813208726458 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095298275162 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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