When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people consider that the salary is the most dominant factor in choosing a job. From my point of view, I disagree with that statement, because I believe that other factors are equally important.
To begin with, the amount of salary is necessary because in the competitive world people need enough money to cover all their living expenses. For example, people are required to pay money for housing, food, bills, health care and education. Also, a high salary can motivate employees to work hard for the future of their workplace. In the United States, for instance, medical staff are paid more than in other countries, which is the reason for the high improvement in the health care system.
However significant the above factor might seem, I strongly disagree with a point that personal income is the most important factor when choosing a job. First of all, it can be easy to achieve success in their regular occupation, if people do not do what to, their desire to work will quickly disappear and they may quit the job. In addition, working conditions are also important, which has a huge impact on people's health during work. For example, even if the wages of workers in factories that produce chemicals are high, working conditions can worsen their health.
In conclusion, although the salary has a clear impact on people's job choices, I do not believe that this factor is the most important than other factors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87603305785 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46013221786 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566115702479 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.820953308 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.272727273 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4545454545 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20000844135 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819843007951 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920274055559 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143742431557 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673408789641 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.