The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.
Agree or disagree?
Online shopping is becoming increasingly popular nowadays. Some people believe that the rise of online shopping will bring a retail apocalypse while others do not. This essay will argue that although there is a steep growth in online shopping nowadays, the niche for retail shopping will exist.
Retail shopping will always take precedence over online because of the touch and feel that it provides to the consumer. Online shopping might be preferred for the purchase of daily consumption items; however, it cannot replace the experiential shopping that retail provides for a want-based purchase. For example, purchase of clothes and shoes would always require a consumer to check the article thoroughly by picking it up and discussing it with the seller rather than randomly ordering it and then ending up with a misfit.
Furthermore, there always remain a transactional risk whenever one is shopping online. While online shopping gives an ease, it also castes significant doubts on the integrity of the data being used owing to increasing concerns over cyber security. In today’s day and age, the online data is never secured as there have been substantial increase in the data leakages and fraudulent activities in the recent times. Facebook and Google, the tech giants, were also making headlines recently regarding their privacy policies and the concerns that the people have over their data security.
To conclude, the trend of retail shopping has no doubt subsided, however, it will not dissipate owing to the experiential shopping and the transactional security it provides to a shopper mission.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, then, while, for example, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31764705882 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69938406975 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564705882353 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5663955274 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.272727273 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290308935001 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128565815585 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817327812016 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184613835921 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762590763492 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.