Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. Extroverts are better leaders than introverts. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are two types of people in world, extroverts and introverts. As per definitions, extrovert is the person who is interested in all around him. He is friendly, talkative, assertive, and has a good social network, whereas introvert is a shy person with few friends and less social network. So, I believe, extroverts have those qualities which are essential for any leader, and therefore I agree with the statement, “Extroverts are better leaders than introverts.”
First, extroverts are all-rounder. In every phase of life, we meet both types of people, such as in school, when we are kids...
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