The following is the memorandum from the business manager of a television station:
"Over the past years, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this period most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, the local businesses, that used to advertise during our late night news program have just canceled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to program and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should restore the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level.”
The presented memorandum from business manager of a television station which has started devoting more time to national news than local news and weather states that, due to receiving more complaints about local news and weather and cancellation of advertising contracts, station should start devoting more time to weather and local news. But the reasons cited in the memorandum needs more evidence to come to this conclusion.
Firstly, memorandum states most of the complaints from viewers are concerned about weather and local news coverage. But we need to know what actually these complaints are concerned about. We should know that these complaints are related to the time at which late night news program is devoting its time to national news. Having complaints which are concerned about station's news coverage rather than time will not conclude to start devoting time again to the weather and local news.
Secondly, memorandum states local businesses have cancelled their advertising contracts. What was the actual moto behind this must be specifically known. There might be a case that local business are growing well or not growing well that is why they have cancelled their contracts. Moreover, there could be another reasons of the local business to cancel their contracts. And, afterall, we should know, after starting devoting more time to local news and weather news is going to have that contracts back.
Also, after resolving complaints of viewers, are viwers going to get attracted to the station? Actual number of complaints should be specifically mentioned. Most number of complaints getting resolved does not indicate station will attract viewers. Another specific evidence needed is about increasing revenues.
Many specific evidences are required to come to conclusion of restoring the devoted time to weather and local news.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 290 350
No. of Characters: 1527 1500
No. of Different Words: 128 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.127 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.266 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.544 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 111 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 94 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 66 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 40 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.125 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.355 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.438 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.372 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.612 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.161 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 378, Rule ID: AFTERALL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'after all'?
Suggestion: after all
...usiness to cancel their contracts. And, afterall, we should know, after starting devotin...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 28.8173652695 59% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 55.5748502994 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 2260.96107784 69% => OK
No of words: 290.0 441.139720559 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40689655172 5.12650576532 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.56307096286 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5971629999 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 204.123752495 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455172413793 0.468620217663 97% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 705.55239521 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.0613719413 57.8364921388 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 119.503703932 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 23.324526521 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 5.70786347227 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.462822373448 0.218282227539 212% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152172093017 0.0743258471296 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141707707537 0.0701772020484 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271877498265 0.128457276422 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136204269261 0.0628817314937 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.3799401198 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.3550499002 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.5979740519 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 98.500998004 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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