some people say that music is a good way of briging people of different cultures and ages together.
to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Some people believes that one of a good way to unity people of different cultures and ages together is using music. I agree with the statement regarding these several reasons.
First, it is widespread believe that music is a universal language. It can be easily enjoyed by people across the globe regardless what their mother tongue language are. For example, my friends put some Korean songs in their playlist eventhough they do not know what the meaning behind those songs. They think that those songs are ear catching so then they to listen to it. Music can deliver messages even without any lyrics in it. Take Yiruma instrumental music for example, we can notice that the music reflects sadness eventhough it is only instrumental music with no lyrics. Evidently, people can understand the language of music since it speaks through the rhythm.
Furthermore, it is commonly believe that listening to the music gives several benefits to somebody’s psychologist condition. Music has a power to release stress in the middle of hectic schedules. They only need to listen to their favorite song while they are doing their work. A kind of music such classical music, can be enjoy people from wide range of ages. Children listen to it in order to make them more focus when they study. Mature person sometimes listen to it on the night after their hectic work day. A clasical music, which has low rhytm, can be used to relaxation for the elderly. So, that is why people can gather to watch their favorite music concert, since music speaks not only for youngster but also the elderly people.
To sum up, because music is universal language and has several benefits. I personally agree that music can bring all people from various cultures and ages together.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, regarding, so, then, while, for example, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91946308725 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4365466557 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56711409396 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8437563992 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.1578947368 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6842105263 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2624769721 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861643840271 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103612741914 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222837258764 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129104115428 0.056905535591 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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