The chart below shows the percentages of industry sectors contribution to the economy of India and Turkey in 2000.
The two pie charts depict how eight different industrial sectors contributed to India and turkey's economy percentage-wise for the year 2000.
Overall, at the beginning of the second millennium, construction contributed the least to the economy and agriculture was the most significant economic sector in India .whereas, in comparison with Turkey, healthcare and education became the largest contribute while the lowest was made by finance, business, and other services.
Firstly, construction had the least share of India's economy and it accounted for a mere 3% in the year 2000. It experienced more than threefold from trade utilities and transportation was 14% and experienced a slide growth of 2% by turkey. At the beginning of the period manufacturing and finance, business, and other services made up 8% and 5% of India's economy respectively, and these figures rose to 12% and 8% in Turkey.
In contrast, an opposing trend can be observed for the remaining sector, where agriculture comprised almost a quarter (which was the highest ) of the country India and it fell by 10% in turkey. The government and leisure and hospitality sector both alleviated by 3% in India with the figures of 9% former sector and 14% for the latter one in Turkey. Notably, the contribution from healthcare and education did not change at all and remained constant in both countries (at 17% ).
- The chart below shows the percentages of industry sectors contribution to the economy of India and turkey in 2000 73
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- The chart below shows the percentages of industry sectors contribution to the economy of India and Turkey in 2000 84
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, so, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 6.8 265% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18385650224 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04682839446 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551569506726 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.8998025806 43.030603864 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.5 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.875 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36654690234 0.215688989381 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161319283183 0.103423049105 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131702625718 0.0843802449381 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251492612404 0.15604864568 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133917641206 0.0819641961636 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.4329268293 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ost significant economic sector in India .whereas, in comparison with Turkey, heal...
^^
Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...usiness, and other services. Firstly, construction had the least share of Indi...
^^
Line 5, column 378, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...% and 5% of Indias economy respectively, and these figures rose to 12% and 8% in ...
^^
Line 7, column 140, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d almost a quarter which was the highest of the country India and it fell by 10% ...
^^
Line 7, column 473, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...mained constant in both countries at 17% .
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, so, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 6.8 265% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18385650224 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04682839446 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551569506726 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.8998025806 43.030603864 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.5 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.875 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36654690234 0.215688989381 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161319283183 0.103423049105 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131702625718 0.0843802449381 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251492612404 0.15604864568 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133917641206 0.0819641961636 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.4329268293 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.