The chart below shows the percentage of industry sector's contribution to the economy of India and Turkey in 2000
The charts below illustrate the percentages of induatry sector's contribution to the economy in the year 2000 between india and Turkey
Overall, health and healthcare and education have same amount of contribution in both the countries,while construction and finance business are at the least in both the countries.
Firstly, the agriculture has the highest contribution in India 24% while government is half of agriculture upto 12%, nextly in India leisure and health are contributed similarly at 17% in the year 2000. On the other side construction is at the least at 3% and same for finance which was 2% more then it. Respectively the contribution of trade was 14% and the contribution of manufacture was similar to half of it at 8% in the year 2000.
Secondly, healthcare and education was the highest in Turkey's at 17% and the half of it was the finance and business which is upto 8% as well as the leisure, hospitality and agriculture have the same contribution of 14% , nextly government and construction were at the least in Turkey upto 9% and 10% where as trade, transportation were at 16% while in 2000 there were more use of transportation and trades and because of trading there will be growth in manufacture and it was at 12% in the year 2000.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'amounted'.
Suggestion: amounted
... and healthcare and education have same amount of contribution in both the countries,w...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , while
...nt of contribution in both the countries,while construction and finance business are a...
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Line 5, column 296, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... and same for finance which was 2% more then it. Respectively the contribution of tr...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ulture have the same contribution of 14% , nextly government and construction were...
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Line 7, column 302, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
... at the least in Turkey upto 9% and 10% where as trade, transportation were at 16% while...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly, similarly, then, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 3.97073170732 453% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85185185185 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09446918825 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.425925925926 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 22.4926829268 191% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.660427021 43.030603864 339% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 209.6 112.824112599 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.2 22.9334400587 188% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.8 5.23603664747 302% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235421337312 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147361076323 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117682026325 0.0843802449381 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219183899439 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.228253887341 0.0819641961636 278% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.0 13.2329268293 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 61.2550243902 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.3012195122 183% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.74 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 11.4329268293 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.9970731707 175% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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