Pollution is one the most crucial issue these days. We all know that contaminating is spreading day to day due to increment in population. However, few believe that air travel should be limited, I oppose the view and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs.
In my opinion, Initially we should get control over rising citizens. Government should apply stringent rule in order to command people, that each family should only have maximum two children above that particular family will not get several benefits from the judicial system. If we want to control the pollution then public ratio must go down, subsequently automatically air impurity will decrease. In addition, as everyone knows that today's world is thriving faster in compare to last two decades and many changes taking place. For instance, earlier folks used to work physically a lot rather than mentally. Nevertheless, individuals are engaged in various businesses plus they have to travel abroad frequently. Moreover, in this age we do have facility to reach any corner of the world in just few hours so, humans prefer to choose comfortable was all as fastest journey without tiring one self. Besides, if anyone has emergency so they would definitely select the air trip.
On the other hand, we could avoid unnecessary travel to save our natural resources. Anyhow, we must direct the humanity not to waste fuel also to control on birth whether or not. For example, If occupants increasing then naturally the use of petrol, gas, oil will hike up plus, gradually air pollution will also shoot up after that global warming will take place.
To sum up with, travelling is mandatory too in this era of modern living but only if it is essential that we can't avoid it. This thing depends individually, we should not force anyone to avoid it. Personally they must be aware of the consequences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
... to waste fuel also to control on birth whether or not. For example, If occupants increasing t...
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Line 7, column 110, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ing but only if it is essential that we cant avoid it. This thing depends individual...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6783797746 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654952076677 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5811379675 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0588235294 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.82352941176 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169881537278 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479111842302 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364241695218 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103289390732 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230130091638 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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