It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
It is claimed that keeping current friendship is more valuable than making new acquaintances, and it is assumed that well-known people are more reliable and closer to relatives. Although keeping good climate in established connections is highly valuable, I dare say that networking with unknown people is equally important nowadays.
Undoubtedly, staying in touch with old friends is of a great value. Already established connections are more closer to “relatives” and are much more reliable in tough situations, because their behaviour is usually much easier to predict. To be specific, doing business with friends from youth is quicker than with unknown people due to lack of trust between and among partners. However, the friendships is not guaranteed and the “wind of change” may come, when your friend-partner may betray you and leave the firm.
Nonetheless, the interests of people usually dramatically change through the life and may move far from those of friends. At that time people make new connections and develop their relationship with other people. Indeed, this concept may happen in every aspect of life beginning from work and continuing to sports or hobbies. Since 2020 the friend of mine has fallen in love with triathlon and made several new connections among other sportsmen from the running club where my friend trains till now. While their friendship has been expanding, they created several business projects conjugated with sports and made much money. Could he imagine that doing sports may dramatically change his life in aspects of life other than physical form and begin a new chapter in his life?
Equally important, new connections may foster career development in business spheres. For example, my neighbour Boris got stuck with generation of ideas at work project and asked for help his more experienced colleague. He then discovered that his colleague usually visited the same jazz club in Moscow. This knowledge laid the foundation for their relationship and further long-hours talks about music, art and jazz improvisation. Eventually, Boris grew as a professional in his firm and got a promotion to Director not only because of his jazz-related interests but also of new friend at work.
All in all, making new friends and staying with old ones has both its positive and negative effects. While old connections may betray at some time, new friendship could create immersive opportunities and gradually change ones life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 105, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'closer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: closer
...ue. Already established connections are more closer to “relatives” and are much more reliab...
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Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'sport'.
Suggestion: sport
...e beginning from work and continuing to sports or hobbies. Since 2020 the friend of mi...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
...m and begin a new chapter in his life? Equally important, new connections may foster c...
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Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...sive opportunities and gradually change ones life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, then, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2076.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29591836735 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8536786579 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548469387755 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7926976406 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.263157895 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6315789474 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298496037122 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850130705988 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754859609737 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172997129045 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615246710241 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.