The chart gives data about the range of age that women birth their first child in the over the period of 40 years in Australia.
Overall, it is visible that the number of women birthing their first child in over 40 year olds stayed in the low point compared to other ages.
Starting at almost 40% of under-nineteen-women having their first child in 1966, there is a significant decline to 20% in 1986, 2 times as much as that of the figure in 2006. The highest point was seen by 65% of the first birth of women from 20 to 24, then fluctuating around 40%. Compared to the figure over 50% that women from 25 to 30 having the first child in 1986, the figure of 1966 and 2006 witnessed a slight fluctuation around 40%.
A substantial increase by 50% of the first child birth was seen in women having their first child in the range of age 30 to 34, almost 40% as much as the proportion of 1966. The year 1966. Compared to under 10% in 1966, the year 2006 saw a considerable rise to 30% of women from 34 to 39, while the figure of over-fourteen-year-old women slightly fluctuated around 0.
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- The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966 1986 and 2006 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35784313725 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7177338851 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455882352941 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2992141753 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.125 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362553044739 0.215688989381 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195233586443 0.103423049105 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103841665495 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268166422481 0.15604864568 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0943537845949 0.0819641961636 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.94 61.2550243902 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.