Many people believe that vegetarian is more healthier and they also think meat is not important to have in a healthy diet. I strongly agree with this statement. The particularly reason for this circumstance is nutrients in meet such as protein are also present in tofu so we don't need to worry about lack of nutrients.
There are many benefits to being-vegetarian. For instance it is also improve mental. Scientist have proven that vegetarian like a dose can cure depression. In the case of cutting down on meat can reduce the excess of certain fats like omega-6 and axit arachadonic, it is one of the cause of an anxiety and stress. Furthermore, Vegetarian diets have a lot of antioxidants, it's can protect metal from stress by reduce oxidative.
Being-vegetarian is not only good for mental, it is also prevent a lot of illness. One example is people who eat meat are easier redundancy of cholesterol, instead of vegetarian just provide enough cholesterol in one day. Especially, it can prevent cancer because the vegetarian's immune system is more effective at killing neoplasm than meat-eater. It has been shown that being-vegetarian provides many protection factors against cancers like sulforaphane, selenium, chloropyll and antioxidants.
Conclusion, become vegetarian has a lot of benefits for physical health and mental health. Beside become vegetarian goods for your health, it's also reduce killing animals. Many people decided to become vegetarian for their health and beautiful animals.
- Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet Do you agree or disagree 56
- the bar chart shows the percentage of elderly citizens in three countries in 1980 2000 2030 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 74
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'healthier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: healthier
Many people believe that vegetarian is more healthier and they also think meat is not importa...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 276, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... protein are also present in tofu so we dont need to worry about lack of nutrients. ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 69, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...ing-vegetarian. For instance it is also improve mental. Scientist have proven that vege...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 372, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...arian diets have a lot of antioxidants, its can protect metal from stress by reduce...
^^^
Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'prevented'.
Suggestion: prevented
...is not only good for mental, it is also prevent a lot of illness. One example is people...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 139, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ecome vegetarian goods for your health, its also reduce killing animals. Many peopl...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28033472803 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12596827666 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610878661088 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2370752195 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201938164612 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705235858073 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506871960566 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12169800578 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270098945867 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'healthier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: healthier
Many people believe that vegetarian is more healthier and they also think meat is not importa...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 276, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... protein are also present in tofu so we dont need to worry about lack of nutrients. ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 69, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...ing-vegetarian. For instance it is also improve mental. Scientist have proven that vege...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 372, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...arian diets have a lot of antioxidants, its can protect metal from stress by reduce...
^^^
Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'prevented'.
Suggestion: prevented
...is not only good for mental, it is also prevent a lot of illness. One example is people...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 139, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ecome vegetarian goods for your health, its also reduce killing animals. Many peopl...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28033472803 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12596827666 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610878661088 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2370752195 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201938164612 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705235858073 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506871960566 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12169800578 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270098945867 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.