Today children spend little free time with their parents.Why is it the case.What are the consequence
These days, the time that children and their parents live together is getting shorter and shorter. This essay will examine two main reasons.
Perhaps the most significant reason for this phenomenon is that children spend too much time in their mobile phone. This explain the issue that children live together with their parents but they do not have any conversations with each other. They prefer watching television or surfing the Internet to chatting with their family members. The less important cause is youngsters are preoccupied with their study instead of their family. With the full timetable for studying, offspring must spend more time for school and extra classes. The left time they do homework or surfing the social network.
The main consequence in this trend is the weakened connections between the members. Children are in the sense of isolated and loneliness. Therefore, they indulge in the virtual world and share with their online friends rather than their own family. Moreover, offspring is less involved in members'lives and this lead to the misunderstanding with each other and generation gaps. Besides, children may suffer from emotional distress and behavioral problems.
In conclusion, I believe that the modern world makes the deficiency of interactions among family members. Children should take notice of the time they spend with parents in order to improve the connection
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34389140271 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63446359545 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574660633484 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2939407169 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.7333333333 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7333333333 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06666666667 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313279140527 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101927554854 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715471331854 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185977430224 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521257736059 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.1 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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