the chart below shows the spending million dollars per household in the US on five different products in 2010 and 2014 Summarize the information

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the chart below shows the spending (million dollars) per household in the US on five different products in 2010 and 2014. Summarize the information

family: Arial; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">The chart presents the expenditure on five disparates products by each family in the us between 2010 and 2014. Overall, there was a general upward trend among all categories after the period of 4 years.

family: Arial; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">It is noteworthy that the highest amount of spending by a household in the us was allocated on food. In details, a family in the us spent over 3500 million dollars on food in 2010, followed by a soar by nearly 1000 million dollars in food expenses over the 4-year-period. Likewise, there was a considerable rise in the spending per family on purchasing smartphones observed from 2000 million dollars to over 2500 million dollars.

family: Arial; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">Coming into second place, the budget dedicated to buying clothes per household remained stable at 2500 million dollars from 2010 to 2014. The figure for toiletries shared a similar trend of stability with the expenditure being 500 million dollars smaller compared to the former. In contrast, the money invested in buying books which saw a plunge to merely 500 million dollars ranked last position in the whole given duration.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Family
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Family
... after the period of 4 years. family: Arial; background-color: transparent; ...
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Suggestion: Family
...to over 2500 million dollars. family: Arial; background-color: transparent; ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Family
...osition in the whole given duration. family: Arial; background-color: transparent; ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
likewise, second, so, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 965.302439024 159% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 6.86995515695 4.92477711251 139% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.99927803511 2.65546596893 188% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52466367713 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 283.868780488 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.45097560976 131% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5014192878 43.030603864 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.222222222 112.824112599 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7777777778 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182989524618 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878851477598 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606032342837 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118370918612 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741836823471 0.0819641961636 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.3 13.2329268293 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 61.2550243902 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 22.86 11.4140731707 200% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 11.4329268293 144% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 23.0 11.0658536585 208% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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