When choosing a job, the salary is most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is widely believed that the salary plays the most important role in job consideration. To a certain extent, I agree that when selecting a job, many consider the salary as their first priority. However, I also believe that there are other important factors may impact our career decision.
To begin with, there are a variety of reasons why a high salary is important when choosing a job. Firstly, in the daily life, lots of people have a desire for a good standard of living. And a handsome salary can help them to achieve this more easily. In addition, it also successfully motivates employees in the workplace. For instance, a recent survey conducted by Career Builder indicated that 70% of questioned people are motivated by salary.
There is no doubt that the salary plays a vital role in job consideration. However, there are two other factors which I considered to be extremely important. The first and significant one is job satisfaction. In particular, many people seek for a job that may bring them happiness and satisfaction during their work. For instance, if I had to choose between the job with a higher salary and the job I liked and makes me satisfied, I would go for the second one. Another factor is the contribution that the work may make towards society. This could bring about a much more civilized society.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the salary, as well as the job satisfaction and the job contribution toward society are important factors when choosing a job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, no doubt, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7984496124 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81947906035 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527131782946 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6645305879 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.375 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6875 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27492036177 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888245915167 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981932090552 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191284419955 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708298757923 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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