'Producing clean energy is an impossible goal. Instead, we need to focus on reducing
energy consumption.'
How far do you agree with this statement? Support your views with justification and examples.
In today's fast moving world, everything is completely driven by energy to sustain or to survive.To a greater extent i agree that producing clean energy is an unimaginable goal. Instead, we need to focus on reducing energy consumption beacuse of decline in natural resources.
From large scale industries to small scale factories,from automobiles sectors to house hold electrical appliances, from spaceship to underwater research - all driven by energy. Considering the rapid growth in technological advancements, the role of energy occupies the most prominent position in deciding the growth of global economy.It should be noted that we can generate energy by various sources such as setting up of windmills, setting up of hydroelectric plants and setting large thermal and nuclear power stations. All these are varied sources by which we can generate energy and by which we satisfy our daily needs to some extent. But it also should be noted that the population rate is also surprisingly increasing at a drastic scale and the daily needs of the people is also steadily increasing. Having said that, energy saving is really need of the hour. By saving energy, we not only makes our life easier but also provides the path to the future generation to live peacefully in the planet.
One of the main factors for wastage of energy is mainly due to negligence. People should realise the importance of energy.
The proper usage of energy should be educated right from the childhood itself. For example, even at homes we use electrical items such as Fans, lights for our daily needs and sometimes forget to switch it off back after the usage.
It is now encouraging to see, many of us are now started adhering to "Go-Green" style of living. The idea of generating energy from unwanted items is now in full swing. We have now proper mechanism for recycling of old items. Many countries encourages to use solar panels both at homes and also at commercial areas. These are all some of the positive signs to look far.
In conclusion, we all love our mother nature and by saving energy we make our live more eco friendly. Alone we can do a little and together we can do so much. So, let's start use energy diligently.
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Message: Did you mean 'seeing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 31.9359605911 194% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1854.0 1207.87684729 153% => OK
No of words: 375.0 242.827586207 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.944 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 3.92707691288 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80784062769 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 139.433497537 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557333333333 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 379.143842365 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6551724138 158% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.7564360624 50.4703680194 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85 7.25397266985 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 6.9802955665 244% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219561476194 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069568875514 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710249450794 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124726082161 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102437879188 0.0609392437508 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 55.0591133005 193% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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