In the future, more people will choose to go on a holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday Do you agree or disagree?
Traveling is considered to be one of the most significant desires of humans since a traveller named Marco Polo had explored world. According to current situation of disease COVID19 a certain number of people are of opinion that they will not be able to travel abroad for vacations. I completely disagree with the above notion and will discuss in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, firstly, people who get exhausted from their daily hectic schedule and travelling to same workplaces, they are consistently searching for a leisure time spending overseas. For example, the one who had always seen plain lands of their own country However, they will be eager to explore mountain regions of other country. Secondly, the wealthy people having high income will never stop exploring foreign nations. In other words, they try to visit the places that are different from their home country. To illustrate, most of them have trips to countries like Dubai, Thailand, Indonesia, Europe.
Furthermore, if someone got their first chance, they will never want to miss out golden opportunity of travelling abroad. To exemplify, in many businesses employees get free foreign tours therefore, nobody wants to lose that lucky chance of boarding plane for holidays. Lastly, people by travelling try to share culture, traditions, ethics, and values to other nations so as widening the horizons and prospects of life.
To conclude, undoubtedly, mankind have faced much life threatening diseases throughout human existence but, have never stopped travelling and exploring other countries. In my opinion, after this disease life will again come back on track and people will be able to enjoy traveling overseas by flights.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34814814815 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68072426387 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659259259259 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9522572843 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.076923077 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197975683453 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718448767206 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392458159727 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121373990948 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241691990969 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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