You are due to start a new job next week but you will not able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your employer. In your letter 1) explain your situation 2) describe your problems 3) tell him/ her when you think you can start.
Dear Sir,
I regret to inform you that it is not possible for me to join your company for the first week of April month as I had told you at the interview. I need extra one week to join the Smith Company because suddenly I had been attacked by severe fever.
In the interview, I told you that I require 15 days to finish my current office works. Unfortunately, I was in hospital for seven days due to the fact that a severe fever attacks me. Therefore, I could not complete my works, so I need extra seven days to finish my current job works. If you want to see the prescription from my doctor, I will show you.
However, I am eagerly waiting for joining to your company. I can join in your company in the second week of April month. If I need to talk anyone for this matter please let me know, I will talk to him. Sorry for any inconvenience that arises for me.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Jahangir
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