For a long time school has been a place that children come, learn, grow and go out to build up a prosper future. These goals have been the same since the beginning and no one can cast doubt on it, although there is still one controversial issue here. The training instruments and materials which schools use to deliver their objectives are not the same and they have to be revised time to time. Books always are considered as a constant tool in school but as far as I’m concerned, there are other valuable substitutes for them and computers are one of those options. Therefore I reckon that schools...
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