There is no doubt that telecasting and playing violence games has been inclined at alarming rate in the contemporary era, therefore, parents of children are becoming more stressed as compared to the earlier, this essay will discussed the detrimental effects of aggressive programmes and suggest some possible ways to aveitiate the problem.
There are a plethora of bad effects of this condition, First and foremost, if children start to watch violence programmes, they will more likely to prone aggressive behavior which would leave a bad impact not only for individual but also for society because according to the government survey is that who watch more violence channels become aggressive than who do not look such type of tv programmers. Moreover, rising illegal activities in games is make more fearless to offspring and they create more conflicts with others, it will bring series problems for thier parents and in society, sometimes, in order to make fame in the society such type of offspring adopt illegal method.
On the other hand, some concrete steps should be taken by government and parents, it will not change this trend unless the parents watch some educational channel with children which teach ethical and moral values as well as an eagle eye should be kept on them by parents while watching and playing games. Last but not least, illegal programmers should be banned in prime time when the whole families sit together to look silver screen,thus violence games should be charged hefty amount of tax which cannot flourish in the community which can disseminate to it.
To encapsulate, given aforementioned information, it is abundantly clear that despite of having such problems can be mitigate by adopting concrete steps where parents and government can play instrumental rule to control it.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'discuss'
Suggestion: discuss
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...ilies sit together to look silver screen,thus violence games should be charged hefty...
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...o look silver screen,thus violence games should be charged hefty amount of tax wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, no doubt, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21843003413 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70851745702 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590443686007 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.7537232863 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 254.833333333 106.682146367 239% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.8333333333 20.7667163134 235% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.5 7.06120827912 262% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213647342833 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102567489278 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331074466412 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119912960381 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418063268051 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.6 13.0946893788 211% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 22.76 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'discuss'
Suggestion: discuss
...ompared to the earlier, this essay will discussed the detrimental effects of aggressive p...
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Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f this condition, First and foremost, if children start to watch violence progra...
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Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...irst and foremost, if children start to watch violence programmes, they will mor...
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Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...more likely to prone aggressive behavior which would leave a bad impact not only ...
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Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cause according to the government survey is that who watch more violence channels...
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Line 3, column 362, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: whom
...iolence channels become aggressive than who do not look such type of tv programmers...
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Line 3, column 570, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... it will bring series problems for thier parents and in society, sometimes, in or...
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Line 3, column 643, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...es, in order to make fame in the society such type of offspring adopt illegal me...
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...he society such type of offspring adopt illegal method. On the other hand, so...
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Line 5, column 224, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...each ethical and moral values as well as an eagle eye should be kept on them by ...
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Line 5, column 238, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd moral values as well as an eagle eye should be kept on them by parents while ...
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Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , thus
...ilies sit together to look silver screen,thus violence games should be charged hefty...
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Line 5, column 457, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o look silver screen,thus violence games should be charged hefty amount of tax wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, no doubt, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21843003413 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70851745702 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590443686007 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.7537232863 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 254.833333333 106.682146367 239% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.8333333333 20.7667163134 235% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.5 7.06120827912 262% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213647342833 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102567489278 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331074466412 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119912960381 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418063268051 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.6 13.0946893788 211% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 22.76 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.