Pros and cons of studying abroad.
In modern times, thanks to globalization, going overseas for further education has become an exciting prospect for many people, particularly students. This is partly because they are affluent or earned a various range of grants and scholarships offered for students, hence, opening the way to get access to foreign schools.
On the one hand, the opportunity to study abroad has noteworthy positive effects. The most outstanding advantage is that overseas education allows people to learn new cultures, which makes them more valuable in this increasingly globalized world. Clearly, they tend to be proficient in particular languages and acknowledge other cultures for the sake of adaptability to new environments. Learning in distant countries brings the offer of further lessons than any of local schools and novel facilities, thus, gaining more encouragement to make progress. Owing to well-informed education, international qualifications would enhance employment chances for post-graduates, which makes individuals more appealing to the employers, resulting in pursuing a high-paid profession.
On the other hand, studying in faraway countries comes along with difficulties in finance and mental health. Obviously, anyone who studies far away has to leave their beloved families, which causes them homesick and unfamiliar with their new lifestyle. In some cases, because of culture shock and language barrier, people may become a victim of bullying. Eventually, students who are desirable to widen their knowledge will have to struggle with a spiritual crisis and budget to live on.
In conclusion, considering the above reasons, despite the trouble people have to deal with, spending time studying in another country is a very valuable experience for young people. As such, it is the best choice a student can make.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so, thus, well, as for, as to, in conclusion, in particular, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63405797101 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04975844454 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677536231884 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2396651126 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.615384615 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0785607641001 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322612729024 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610661532309 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0432465885096 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252583000334 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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