It is irrefutably true that change is a law of nature, so that gone are the days when public done a single job in their whole life career ,in the contemporary era, changing career and residential place has become new trend among young generation because they want to broaden their horizons in various field. I think this new trend will give numerous benefits to the individuals, it will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
To the outset, one major reason is for changing job is money because inhabitants are living in the materialistic world where they want to buy luxurious lifestyle, it impossible without money as well as financial burden can be mitigated on the family shoulders. To cite an example, If a person earning 10000 per month,he / she will change his/ her career, if they get more pay for same hours such as 15000 per month. Moreover, people will not learn new culture and traditions unless they live with that cultural people and start to follow them, this trend may be alleviated issue armed conflicts and raise felling of integrity, stability and fraternity and so on, it would helpful the growth of the country by leaps and bounds.
In addition, choosing various career can be a liberating experience and enjoyed variety of venues at free of cost because most of companies offering
it in order to escalate their production and incline number of hours for working. This experience would be opened up new avenues of employment with exorbitantly high salary pay. Last but not least, some return to school to persure course of study that can lead into new career while use same skills and experience to take same position in fresh environment , Despite of having new experience will comes immensely handy to run own business.
To encapsulate, taking into consideration after mentioned above all information, it is abundantly clear that changing variety of places with changes of career path can bring multifarious benefits for individuals such as improved production, open up new vistas of employment and enhance various type of culture, therefore, these changes are providing benefits not only for individuals but also contributing in holistic development of country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, i think, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08864265928 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77226707133 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617728531856 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.116491214 49.4020404114 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 204.111111111 106.682146367 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.1111111111 20.7667163134 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185017425174 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694138324441 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533386689739 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937854287114 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501054887171 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.6 13.0946893788 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.13 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.