With the technological advancement the usage of internet has also surged rapidly. Eventhough one cannot ignore the fact that it has made our life easier, there are also certain disadvantages associated with it.
Firstly, the use of internet has caused a lack of knowledge and understanding in people for instance with the increase use of internet, the issues of cyber crime are also increasing rapidly and people are facing frauds,fake mails are sent claiming people that they have won lottery, free gift hampers etc and in return when the host share their bank details, they loose a huge sum of money. Furthermore when people use net banking there are various cases where the money couldn’t reach the destination and the refund process is very tedious. while Shopping via internet there are chances of receiving fake items and products of cheaper qualities, it is better to visit the store and to analyze the product before buying it if time permits.
Overuse of internet has made people of todays generation very lazy, with the increasing hype of internet in society peoples involvement in physical activities has reduced drastically.people arenot ready to get out of their comfort zone and this has very negative impact on their health.
However one cannot ignore the fruitful outcome caused by internet, one hour of long queue in bank can be easily avoided and the work can be completed with just one tap from our home.booking has been made easier with the option of virtual tour, Physically disable people has accessibility to almost every hook and corner through internet.
To put my though in nutshell people should use internet whnever necessary but shouldnot be totally disconnected from the society. Ony limited and necessary transaction should be done through internt and if any risk is involved going in person will be the best choice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , fake
...ing rapidly and people are facing frauds,fake mails are sent claiming people that the...
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Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...etails, they loose a huge sum of money. Furthermore when people use net banking there are v...
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Line 3, column 543, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...and the refund process is very tedious. while Shopping via internet there are chances...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 965.302439024 161% => OK
No of words: 305.0 196.424390244 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09180327869 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68521187352 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 106.607317073 174% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609836065574 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 283.868780488 175% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.533184991 43.030603864 236% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.555555556 112.824112599 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8888888889 22.9334400587 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 5.23603664747 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148677403501 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579309285866 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358124642198 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769356924898 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372216369731 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.2329268293 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 61.2550243902 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 40.7170731707 209% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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