Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
In my opinion, I strongly recommend some young adults to be independent from their parents sooner when they can. Generally, in the early 20s, people used to start independence from their family. From the very beginning, they might search for a house that fits their financial circumstances. If the house is prepared, they might choose furniture and electronics which they want. In this process, I believe that young adults can get a sense of responsibility.
I admit that if young adults live with their families as long as they can, they can save money because they do not need to pay the rent. On top of that, they would live as they used to do, for instance, sometimes they do not need to care much about house chores. On the other hand, this situation entails that young adults tend to rely on family members too much. It is not a good scenario for having an opportunity to be mutual.
In spite of some advantages of living together with family, I see that there are more possibilities to improve their abilities when it comes to living and maintain their vitality when they are independent. For example, many young adults learn how to cook properly when they begin to live alone. Furthermore, caring about house chores is necessary to be independent.
Personally, I experienced a lot of valuable things when I began to live separate from family. By paying the rental fee for myself, I learned how earning and saving money is important and by decorating and placing my home, I got to know my taste better. Even more, I realized how the role of my parents was paramount to me by living disperse and knowing their absence.
In conclusion, I opine on the independence of young adults has many invaluable sides in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in spite of, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74257425743 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67094386255 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547854785479 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7218861095 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8125 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336572484861 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116122824329 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736635810778 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195315693236 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598827329825 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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