Now a days, Most of the parents send their children to the private schools, children who are studying in the government schools gradually decreases. Whom send their kids to private Schools, parents are not required to pay the taxes to the government, this will support the state educational policy. I am not completely obey the statement.
On the One hand, people are more interested to send their children to the Private schools, Most of the families prefer the private institutions for their children education. Present government not collect any taxes from the parents , who are educated in the private organizations. This will help to the parents. Already Fee is high in private organizations, again government gather taxes from parents , this will add burden to the parents. For example, India most of the families depend on agriculture, Their income will be less compare to other jobs, Farming Background people are interested to join their children in the private schools, if government gather tax from them, it will effect their family wealth and health. In this point of view not collecting taxes is better.
On the other hand, Rapidly growth of the private organizations scale is gradually increases, Because parents are showing interest towards private schools. Due to this private organizations increase their fee. As well as important of government schools is decreases, people are not show interest towards government schools. So, when ever Government should collect tax from parents , whose children are studying in the private institutions. This time slowly pivotal of government schools is improve. Government should take measures to increase the government schools and also provide the requirements to the children and staff in the schools. Increase the standards of the syllabus. When provide the good education to children , most of the families definitely join their children in the public schools.
All sum up, as they mentioned in the statement, i am not fully accept the statement. Government encourage the private organizations, with out collecting taxes from parents, pivotal of public schools gradually decreases, this time parents having some burden to send their children to private schools. Although, government should provide the quality of education to the children , this will help to poor people and also the government.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...tion to the children , this will help to poor people and also the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1990.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39295392954 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83730535822 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.411924119241 0.561755894193 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1561742709 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.45 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339337037691 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120122972466 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741224059335 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259310331614 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601049383184 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.