All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools.
It is undeniable that our time at school is a memorable one. But how unforgettable it would be if our parents had been an active part of it? The author claims that it should be mandatory for all parent to volunteer at their children’s schools. While this may appear to be a very random opinion, I opine that it has some merit for consideration. This can be seen in the following three examples.
First of all, this would allow all parents to understand their children a lot better and from a different perspective that is crucial to the development of the child. It would allow each parent to observe closely the environment in which their child is studying. For instance, a child who is struggling with academics, might be subjected to extra tuitions to ameliorate his grades. However, it may not be the root of the problem. Perhaps the child is being bullied at school or the child may have social anxiety which frustrate him from focusing at school. All of this can only be understood by the parent by observing their children first hand at school to gain some insights into their lives. Hence, this would be a merit of parents volunteering in their children’s schools.
Consequently, this will also allow parents to have a better relationship with their child and the teacher. The teacher has to shoulder the responsibility of the child, be it for his accomplishments or for his mistakes, and parents fail to empathize with the teacher. For instance, after volunteering at school, parents would realise how refractory children can actually be and how difficult it is to manage them. This is would provide a parents with a better perspective of what a treacher experiences, engendering a better and healthier communication mode with the teacher. This will ultimately result in improving the child’s performance at the school, resulting in contentment the teachers and parents from the volunteering experience.
However, I also agree that this should not be made mandatory for all parents. Schooling is expensive and many parents work relentlessly to for their children’s education. For instance, a single mother working two jobs to pay for her child’s fees, cannot spare time to volunteer at school as well as manage the household at the same time. It would be unfair and counter productive to make this reccomendation for all parents wihtout understanding each parent’s position outside of school. Making this compulsory, would only result in the aggravation of the parent’s daily struggles and may also adversely affect a child’s situation at home. Hence it should not be made compulsory for a parent to volunteer at their child’s school.
As we have seen clearly from the above examples, the notion of making parents volunteer at their child’s school presents both merits and demerits. It does appear to have a positive intent to it, it is many difficult practical implications. While in the long run it may help the teachers at school and aid parents in understanding their children better, it should not also serve as a burden to parents who are already doing everything they can to raise their child to the best of their capabilities.
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Suggestion: the teacher
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... child to the best of their capabilities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, may, so, well, while, as to, for instance, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 12.4196629213 201% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 57.0 33.0505617978 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2565.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 529.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84877126654 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79583152331 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80584324494 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.404536862004 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 783.9 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.2370786517 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 529.0 23.0359550562 2296% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 60.3974514979 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2565.0 118.986275619 2156% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 529.0 23.4991977007 2251% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 129.0 5.21951772744 2471% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.457309994201 0.243740707755 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.457309994201 0.0831039109588 550% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0758088955206 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.324870622521 0.150359130593 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764244340334 0.0667264976115 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 265.9 14.1392134831 1881% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -457.0 48.8420337079 -936% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.92365168539 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 208.4 12.1743820225 1712% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.33 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 32.71 8.38706741573 390% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 11.8971910112 479% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 213.6 11.2143820225 1905% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 57.0 11.7820224719 484% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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