Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world is increasing. Discuss some possible reasons and how to solve this problem.
Recent research has shown that juvenile delinquency is becoming increasingly popular, especially in big cities. This essay will show some primary reasons for this tendency as well as some potential solutions to reduce crime rate in the youth.
It is obvious that there are several causes of the rising number of young criminals. First and foremost, the main driving force behind this issue could be the lack of parents' attention as adults are more and more busy doing business. This means that parents spend extremely little time on taking care of their children. For instance, they do not know what their children do and who they play with. Thus, young people would easily go off the ray and be out of control, which are signs of potential lawbreakers. In addition, mass media, which has been all the range thanks to technological developments, has taken a toll on children's growth due to their violent movies. These products not only influence children's behavior but also show them how to commit a crime thoroughly. A good example of this is some horror movies, which are filled with brutal and bloody senses.Therefore excessive media coverage without content limitation can breed future offenders.
On the other hand, some feasible solutions can be done by both family and the government to reduce young crime. First of all, it is important for parents to make time for their children. By spending time together, parents can easily grasp all the psychological and behavioral changes of teenagers and then take some needed actions to form children’s personalities in a positive way. Secondly, there is a need for the government to launch educational programs as a way to prevent the youth from committing crimes. Because it is proved that those who are given moral education as children are more likely not to break the laws.
In conclusion, the roots of the rising young wrongdoers are some external factors and lack of parent control. However, I believe that this dilemma can be solved smoothly with the combination between family and the authority.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95601173021 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57243094196 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574780058651 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 341.0 20.2975951904 1680% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1690.0 106.682146367 1584% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 341.0 20.7667163134 1642% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 163.0 7.06120827912 2308% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189945579177 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189945579177 0.084324248473 225% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125037168832 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549968022243 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 172.4 13.0946893788 1317% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -266.18 50.2224549098 -530% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 135.1 11.3001002004 1196% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.97 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.25 8.58950901804 282% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 138.4 10.1190380762 1368% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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