Music always has been an inseparable part of humankind's life from its beginning thousands of years ago. Firstly, it was an instrument for communication and a means to unite power against predators. In the modern world, the function of music is mostly entertaining. Although, someone considers it as a way to connect people of various social-demographic features, namely age and culture, and I completely agree with their view.
Firstly, the pop music of decades ago, such as Beatles, Queen, and ABBA, lies deep in the hearts of elders but continues to be common to youngsters. Any family holiday would be a great party for everyone, from young to old, if "YMCA" by Village People will play. The grandparents hang out with their grandchildren and have fun and memorable moment, thanks to the famous song, which brings them together.
Another proof that world-known songs connect diverse people is Tiktok trends. The audience of this app is mainly teenagers, however, there are grownups who use it. Some user records a dance to a song, and in few days this particular video becomes a trend that will be repeated by hundreds of people. In several days the song is played in cafes and clubs of entire Europe or the USA, while citizens of any nation know the tune.
In conclusion, music is the clearest example of the connection between people around the world, furthermore, I coincide with persons who think that it is a perfect way to gather different cultures and generations also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72116445663 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 250.0 20.2975951904 1232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1210.0 106.682146367 1134% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 250.0 20.7667163134 1204% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 86.0 7.06120827912 1218% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244387554535 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.244387554535 0.084324248473 290% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136323905789 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378796958901 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 126.4 13.0946893788 965% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -173.81 50.2224549098 -346% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 99.6 11.3001002004 881% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.27 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.14 8.58950901804 234% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 102.0 10.1190380762 1008% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 56.0 10.7795591182 520% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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