It is irrefutably true that selecting an employee is hard nut to crack for employers because many factors have to consider while hiring a perfect candidate for suitable position. Therefore, some individuals of the society admit that personal qualities should be given priorities as compared to qualification and experience; However, I think not only personal qualities but also background education and experience take into consideration as a major factor, essay will be discussed in the upcoming paragraph.
To begin with, background qualification and experience has been taking more importance since ages while requiting a person for job,first and foremost, a student is studying in order to gain both theoretical and practical knowledge which can be utilized to get a good job and these skills can improve the condition of company where he/ she will do job. If experienced employee solves problem the at the snap of of finger, personal qualities cannot be used at that time. Moreover, there are some jobs require exposure and advance study and the personal trait may not be needed. To cite an example, a doctors, professional engineer and so on , a employer will choose those who would have hand on experience rather than personal trait people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, i think, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15270935961 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86203929001 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679802955665 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 203.0 20.2975951904 1000% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1046.0 106.682146367 980% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 203.0 20.7667163134 978% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 103.0 7.06120827912 1459% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237964074268 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.237964074268 0.084324248473 282% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187249062866 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00276562436038 0.056905535591 5% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 104.3 13.0946893788 797% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -143.03 50.2224549098 -285% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 83.6 11.3001002004 740% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.07 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.83 8.58950901804 208% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 83.2 10.1190380762 822% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 84.0 10.7795591182 779% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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