Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what type of neighbor is the best to have?
· someone who is quiet
· someone who we are similar to
· someone who is supportive
Use specific details and examples in your answer.
A famous proverb in Italy- “A good neighbor, a good morning”, does demonstrate how important it is to own qualified neighbors. Most prefer someone supportive enough to ease their hectic lives; however, the type of quiet ones must be the best option.
A majority of people voting to reside with supportive neighbors due to the infinite help received when facing unforeseen issues. They lament that individual strength cannot make any differences or even deal with tiny problems, the better results, conversely, may come from the consolidations among residents. They fume. However, they do forget that with the growth of the service industry, everything can be untied within some seconds from fixing the door, repairing the pump, or simply sharing stories to lighten the neglected elderly. There is no reason to ask for others’ help when all services are available at hand.
What even more compelling to stay in a quiet residential area is the sense of peace in today’s tumultuous life. It is undeniable that many men, many minds and there is no way to confine or isolate the difference in human characteristics. However, there are still chances to go for the community where to live in. It must be awful to imagine how tired you are after long busy working days, laying down on your stuffy sofa and enjoying the warm ambiance inside your home is so ideal to relieve all tensions at work. Unfortunately, something goes wrong when you have to suffer from the noise penetrating your private space, all caused by the nearby party organized by one of your friendly neighbors. It is perceptible to notice that your stress has been accumulated into piles without being assuaged and that thanks to the ones living next door. This long-lasting annoyance can be solved if you choose to live in a neighborhood with full of quiet people who prefer an undisturbed living environment.
All in all, wisely choosing those quiet enough to be neighbors with is deemed to bring more happiness in life than ever.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, however, if, may, second, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83035714286 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60632563567 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627976190476 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 336.0 20.1344086022 1669% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1623.0 100.406767564 1616% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 336.0 20.6045352989 1631% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 47.0 5.45110844103 862% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196652080903 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196652080903 0.076458572812 257% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10539208532 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065371494007 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 169.3 11.7677419355 1439% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -269.56 58.1214874552 -464% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 134.3 10.1575268817 1322% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.21 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.92 8.01818996416 298% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 10.002688172 570% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 136.4 10.0537634409 1357% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 57.0 10.247311828 556% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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