Dear Sahil,
I hope you are doing well. I’m sorry that I haven’t written for so long due to my busy schedule at work and I have never had a minute for myself for the last few months. I am writing to thank you for a delicious meal at your home and also want to invite you to my residence for a lunch.
I am extremely grateful for your love and hospitality. I certainly enjoyed the meal as your mother cooked every item according to our choice. My family members also like your appreciation and even my mother asked me to invite you and your family for a meal at my home. I felt nostalgic and that dinner meal made me remember our childhood memories.
Now, it’s my turn to invite you to my house on coming Saturday evening for a dinner. Please suggest to me the type of cuisine your family love, especially for your mother. Besides, I’ve to buy some presents for your father and I hope he will like a glass of red wine that I have received from my client in France during my business travel.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Regards,
Shwatank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...Dear Sahil I hope you are doing well Im sorry that I havent written for so long...
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Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...hope you are doing well Im sorry that I havent written for so long due to my busy sche...
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Line 7, column 5, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... remember our childhood memories Now its my turn to invite you to my house on co...
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Line 7, column 176, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...love especially for your mother Besides Ive to buy some presents for your father an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24378109453 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23870646545 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562189054726 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 201.0 16.3608247423 1229% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 853.0 76.5299724578 1115% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 201.0 16.8248392259 1195% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.0 4.34317383033 668% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35607304515 0.216113520407 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.35607304515 0.0766984524023 464% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221012706027 0.12726935374 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844335755672 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 99.0 8.37731958763 1182% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -115.62 70.7449484536 -163% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 79.3 7.45979381443 1063% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.79 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 15.57 7.59969072165 205% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 8.62886597938 626% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 82.4 8.54432989691 964% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 54.0 8.15463917526 662% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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