Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? My lifestyle is easier and more comfortable than the one my grandparents experienced when they were young. Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
It often found controversial about human activities that is degrading the earth and affecting the balance and functionality of nature. I strongly in the favour of avoiding those activities which is responsible for imbalancing the functionality of nature. There are some points which I will cover below in the passages.
To begin with industrial activities which many of the industries are using harmful chemical to make its product cheaper and efficient in use. These chemicals is way more far dangerous for the environment as well as humans. They discharge these chemical’s residue into the rivers known as effluents and change the climatic condition of that area making its vulnerable to livings. It cause many health problem in the area where theses factories is situated. Water discharged from the area is not fit for drinking after the introduction of these chemical for the residence. I reminded my days when I was working with Infosys in CSR department my job is lookout and make reports of rivers which is located besides a factory. Reports contains the status of the water which is fit for drinking and if it goes beyond a certain level of impurity I have to forward the report to the authority linked with our CSR department.
Second, the hunger to generate more and more power leads to devastating activity known as mining. It create pollution of almost every category such as Air, Water, Noise and Land. Mining affects the life of workers as well as the residents near them. It cause various respiratory problems such hepatitis A,B, Asthma, allergy and many more. In my early days when I was posted Bihar there was a village Darbhanga known for its mining activities where coal was extracted and send to the power plant for power generation the dust particle and bombardment have covered about a 50 mile of radius making the area barren unfit for living and agriculture.
In the conclusion activities of any kind of that creates pollution must be stopped and banned for future generation because nature is a gift of god which must be preserved for present and future generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'chemicals'' or 'chemical's'?
Suggestion: chemicals'; chemical's
... as well as humans They discharge these chemicals residue into the rivers known as efflue...
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Line 3, column 379, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...rea making its vulnerable to livings It cause many health problem in the area where t...
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Line 3, column 385, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much health', 'a good deal of health'.
Suggestion: much health; a good deal of health
...king its vulnerable to livings It cause many health problem in the area where theses factor...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
Suggestion: creates
...devastating activity known as mining It create pollution of almost every category such...
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Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...s as well as the residents near them It cause various respiratory problems such hepat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, second, so, well, kind of, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90056818182 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66112823808 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528409090909 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 352.0 20.1344086022 1748% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1725.0 100.406767564 1718% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 352.0 20.6045352989 1708% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 80.0 5.45110844103 1468% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 11.8709677419 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0752516311744 0.236089414692 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752516311744 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0355490655096 0.150856017488 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373671971278 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 177.6 11.7677419355 1509% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -285.8 58.1214874552 -492% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 140.6 10.1575268817 1384% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.62 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 25.09 8.01818996416 313% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 10.002688172 600% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 142.8 10.0537634409 1420% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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