Last month, you travelled to another city. You told a friend who lives in the city that you would meet them, but you did not. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
- apologise for not meeting him/her
- explain why you did not contact him/her earlier
- suggest a time and place to meet in the future
Dear Rohan,
I hope you are doing well. I’m sorry for not keeping my promise to come to your home to enjoy quality time with you and your family.
As you know, last week I came to Toronto for a business meeting. And, I made a promise to stay free on the last day of my business trip. However, I was occupied with a busy schedule. Unfortunately, I had to prepare the final documentation because the paperwork required to be submitted to my client on the last day of my trip. Due to this work, I was unable to come to your place for enjoying my free time with you on that day.
Besides, I did not have my dinner on the same day because of my work which got completed after midnight. After that, I took a shower and only had a Red Bull which was kept in the small refrigerator of the suite booked by my company. In all this, I forgot to remind you that I need to re-schedule our meetup plans.
Since I couldn’t meet you on my last visit to your city, I’m coming after two weeks on Christmas night at your place. This time I won’t be disappointing you because we have winter holidays to enjoy Christmas and New Year’s eve. So, let’s plan to go outskirts of your city to enjoy breathtaking views of the mountains.
I am looking forward to seeing you soon.
Warm regards,
Shwatank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Rohan I hope you are doing well Im sorry for not keeping my promise to com...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oy quality time with you and your family As you know last week I came to Toronto ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...the last day of my business trip However I was occupied with a busy schedule Unfo...
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Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...joying my free time with you on that day Besides I did not have my dinner on the ...
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Line 4, column 307, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at I need to reschedule our meetup plans Since I couldnt meet you on my last visi...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...o reschedule our meetup plans Since I couldnt meet you on my last visit to your city ...
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Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... meet you on my last visit to your city Im coming after two weeks on Christmas nig...
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Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...njoy breathtaking views of the mountains I am looking forward to seeing you soon ...
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Line 8, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... seeing you soon Warm regards Shwatank
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, look, so, well, mind you, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.13114754098 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36344325404 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536885245902 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 244.0 16.3608247423 1491% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1008.0 76.5299724578 1317% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 244.0 16.8248392259 1450% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 52.0 4.34317383033 1197% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237813847984 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.237813847984 0.0766984524023 310% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150251714632 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460384916087 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 120.0 8.37731958763 1432% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -150.8 70.7449484536 -213% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 94.9 7.45979381443 1272% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.15 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.68 7.59969072165 233% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 8.62886597938 614% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 99.6 8.54432989691 1166% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 95.0 8.15463917526 1165% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.