the picture below shows how tomato ketchup is made
The pictures present information about the process of tomato ketchup manufacture. It is clear that it takes a lot of effort to make the ultimate products with 15 distinct steps in total from the beginning to the ending.
At the first step in the production of tomato ketchup, tomatoes are picked and put into baskets. Then they are classified according to its quality, and tomatoes that do not meet the standards need to be got rid of. Next, the suitable tomatoes are loaded onto a lorry and delivered to a factory. In the factory, stalk, together with seeds and peel are eliminated from tomatoes which are then put into containers to be crushed. Afterwards, the additives included sugar, vinegar and salt are added to the container. After that, this mixture is boiled and left cool for 2 hours.
The process continues with two steps of pouring the sauce into bottles and labelling them. The final products are carefully inspected before being packaged. Tomato ketchup’s bottles are transported to supermarket and finally are ready to use with hamburger and fries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 218, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n total from the beginning to the ending At the first step in the production of t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ture is boiled and left cool for 2 hours The process continues with two steps of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88268156425 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5187911494 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608938547486 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 179.0 22.4926829268 796% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 874.0 112.824112599 775% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 179.0 22.9334400587 781% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.0 5.23603664747 458% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172944214493 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172944214493 0.103423049105 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115064960402 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313488944315 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 91.1 13.2329268293 688% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -110.21 61.2550243902 -180% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 73.1 10.3012195122 710% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.21 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 16.84 8.06136585366 209% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 11.4329268293 481% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 73.6 10.9970731707 669% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 74.0 11.0658536585 669% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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