You eat at your college cafeteria every lunch time. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the cafeteria manager. In your lefter:
- Explain what you like about the cafeteria
- say what is wrong
- suggest how it could be improved
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this to inform you that there are some problems in the campus cafeteria which need you to pay attention and take actions.
my name is Elsa and I am a loyal customer of your cafeteria ever since I started my university program 3 years ago. The food served here has always been extremely high quality and fresh with very affordable price. As I am a vegetarian, the meat-free option that your store offer is incredible.
However, I started realizing some issues as I come here for my lunch every single school day. The seating capacity is not enough to serve all the students, I have observed many students had to stand up and eat during the peak time. Furthermore, your heating system is not running well either, especially in the winter time. I often feel like I walk in a freezer when my fellows and I visit your place.
I feel that these limitations are quite easy to address by investing more in renovations and purchasing more furnitures. The restaurant is quite busy because you are the only place has vegan options here in campus so that I believe you have financial stable to take these actions.
I hope you will take this into account in order to contribute to our better campus.
Your faithfully,
elsa Hoang
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing this to inform you that the...
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...ed you to pay attention and take actions my name is Elsa and I am a loyal custome...
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...tion that your store offer is incredible However I started realizing some issues ...
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...that your store offer is incredible However I started realizing some issues as I co...
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...nd eat during the peak time Furthermore your heating system is not running well eith...
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...r when my fellows and I visit your place I feel that these limitations are quite ...
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...e financial stable to take these actions I hope you will take this into account i...
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...order to contribute to our better campus Your faithfully elsa Hoang
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...to our better campus Your faithfully elsa Hoang
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, so, well, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58928571429 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42909658188 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 224.0 16.3608247423 1369% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1028.0 76.5299724578 1343% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 224.0 16.8248392259 1331% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 43.0 4.34317383033 990% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228389929494 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.228389929494 0.0766984524023 298% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117121802596 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684360354239 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 112.2 8.37731958763 1339% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -147.42 70.7449484536 -208% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 89.5 7.45979381443 1200% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.82 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.71 7.59969072165 233% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 8.62886597938 684% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 91.6 8.54432989691 1072% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 92.0 8.15463917526 1128% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.