In the past shopping was a routine domestic task many people nowadays regard it as a hobby to what extent do you think is a positive Trend
It is undeniable that in conventional period people went for shopping for their household needs; however, it is this contemporary era shopping turn out to be a hobby. I find am largely found this trend to be positive.
To embark with, spend time with family members is one of the predominant reason to find this trend positive in nature. This is so because every multitudes have hectic schedule now, so they get chance to get together during shopping plans when they spend time with loved ones, then it add to relax their mind; consequently, they can do their office work efficiently with fresh mind. As per the esteemed newspaper report 'The Tribune' in Canada owing to hectic schedule 80% people plan with their family for shopping on weekends.
Nonetheless, over uses of money by shopaholics is the foremost bad impact on shopping. Elaborately, in this modern era, numerous people have credit cards to which they over consumed that products even which are not useful in their lives ;resultantly, which is benefit for sellers but not for consumers. Apart from this, wastage of time is the another negative impact on this concern. As they say time is precious period, so people could spend it in order in other helpful activities like sports and education. they could more focus to enhance knowledge rather than waste time on shopping. For instance, one of my friend had enough money and she spent on shopping and now she doesn't have extra knowledge which he needs for promotion.
To recapitulate, although spend time with family is found progressive in nature, those found regressive in nature are not only it is a over uses of money but also it is a waste of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, nonetheless, so, then, apart from, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8362369338 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56543024364 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3905973665 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.666666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0722116694446 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0293966511313 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261615768473 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0463997637473 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338149085533 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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