Dear sir or madam,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing with regard to your advert which is published in an Australian magazine two days ago.
I am Hiva Farahani a 26-year-old university student at Royal university located in the northeast of Australia exactly near your house based on the address you have attached to the advert. Since I am studying an m.a program in psychology I am mostly free and I just attend university a few days a week. Moreover, the significant salary of this job can cover my university and living expenses. By this I mean I could reach an acceptable financial assist for my current situation.
Talking about my qualifications, I have passed an international child's caring course in Canada several years ago and I have the experience of babysitting 3 to 6-year-old children. Be certain that I am entirely familiar with children's behavior at this age. Along with this, I am a patient and caring individual who can establish a highly good rapport with children swiftly. In fact, I am a cook working in a local restaurant in my hometown and this expertise aid me to provide your family with French cuisine. I am also aware that children's food must meet special as well as standard requirements so be sure most of the dishes I am skilled in cooking are healthy and do not contain any allergy stimulators ingredients.
In light of the fact that I am totally new to the environment of Australia, I usually study or go to libraries in my free time. if I take up this role, I will devote the majority of my free time taking care of your daughter and fulfilling ongoing daily tasks in your house.
For further inquiry I am always reachable via e-mail at this address presented below:
hivafara77@gmail.com
I am eager to earn your affirmative feedback at your earliest convenience.
Thanks for your time and consideration.
Respectfully yours,
Hiva Farahani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion:
...ing ongoing daily tasks in your house. For further inquiry I am always reachabl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, well, i mean, in fact, talking about, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 937.175257732 169% => OK
No of words: 327.0 206.0 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8501529052 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02584823789 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 127.690721649 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614678899083 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 290.88556701 173% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.2683879128 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.125 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16404032492 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592385877088 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471873230001 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796178862987 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672202603249 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 41.2886597938 218% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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