You have decided to set up a business for which you want to avail the facility of bank loan.
Write a letter to the bank manager requesting for information about the bank loan and in your letter, write the following:
Why you are writing the letter
What is the amount of bank loan you need
When you are able to repay the loan
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing this letter to ask for the information regarding a business loan from your bank.
I have a plan to set up a new project for which I am lacking few funds. Because of this, I decided to avail of a loan from your bank as my account has been working here for the past ten years. From your website, I came to know about some loyalty programs for older customers that's why I would like to know about procedures for applying for a loan office lakh under the same program. Moreover, does my credit card score plays any role here, like any benefit of a good credit score.
Being a loyal customer, I would give you a surety about returning the loan amount within the period of two years with quarterly installments. My bank account details have been attached to this letter. I would be most grateful if you could provide me the asked information as soon as possible. For any other information contact me by telephone.
Yours Faithfully,
Ally
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 52, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[2]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...lan to set up a new project for which I am lacking few funds. Because of this, I decided t...
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Line 4, column 276, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...me loyalty programs for older customers thats why I would like to know about procedur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53977272727 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46698005986 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647727272727 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6337594331 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382395890061 0.216113520407 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130717128717 0.0766984524023 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943264249387 0.0603063233224 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282151091288 0.12726935374 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935798547947 0.0580467560999 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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