The government has plays important rule in enhancing welfare to the general public. Whether the governments should fund money to improve internet access or to improve public transportations, this can be evaluated in many aspects, in my opinion, I concur with the statement that government should spend money to support internet access, and in the following essay, I will elaborate on a couple reasons to explain my point of view.
Admittedly, some people believe that government should pay more attention on public transportation because everyone need these vehicals to move conveniently. But to me I thought that internet has more payoff than transportation.
First, with the advancement in all aspect of technologies in modern era, internet became essential part in individual life, this is due to the fact that, internet is crucial thing that all people use it for education purpose, this is compelling example from my real life, my daughter use her computer to help her understand the school subjects easily, she can open youtube or google app and get a lot of information and explanation for anything which my struggling with, furthermore, the students can take online classes, this will help them especialy those who have work, so they can work and study in the same time, as acontrast, in the past we depend strongly on our teachers for understanding our academic topics, thanks for school because they provide them internet access for free for all students.
In addition, there are a lot of benefit from using internet, we can get our destination easily than in the past, hence we can use navigation, therefore this help us to manage our time and reach place easily, I remember, when I was in the fourth grade, my family went to the Chicaco in summer brake, and in that time the internet not be invented, my dad lost his way many time and lost much time until we reached, this explain to us the importance of technology in using the internet.
To sum up, the statement is as persuasive as it stands, based on my exposition I mentioned above, I thought that government should fund money to access internet for free since this will help in education and give facility in many part in our life.
The government has plays important rule in enhancing welfare to the general public. Whether the governments should fund money to improve internet access or to improve public transportations, this can be evaluated in many aspects, in my opinion, I concur with the statement that government should spend money to support internet access, and in the following essay, I will elaborate on a couple reasons to explain my point of view.
Admittedly, some people believe that government should pay more attention on public transportation because everyone need these vehicals to move conveniently. But to me I thought that internet has more payoff than transportation.
First, with the advancement in all aspect of technologies in modern era, internet became essential part in individual life, this is due to the fact that, internet is crucial thing that all people use it for education purpose, this is compelling example from my real life, my daughter use her computer to help her understand the school subjects easily, she can open youtube or google app and get a lot of information and explanation for anything which my struggling with, furthermore, the students can take online classes, this will help them especialy those who have work, so they can work and study in the same time, as acontrast, in the past we depend strongly on our teachers for understanding our academic topics, thanks for school because they provide them internet access for free for all students.
In addition, there are a lot of benefit from using internet, we can get our destination easily than in the past, hence we can use navigation, therefore this help us to manage our time and reach place easily, I remember, when I was in the fourth grade, my family went to the Chicaco in summer brake, and in that time the internet not be invented, my dad lost his way many time and lost much time until we reached, this explain to us the importance of technology in using the internet.
To sum up, the statement is as persuasive as it stands, based on my exposition I mentioned above, I thought that government should fund money to access internet for free since this will help in education and give facility in many part in our life.
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... help in education and give facility in many part in our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, in addition, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.888 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78674194476 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.1344086022 263% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 242.500494424 48.9658058833 495% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 261.857142857 100.406767564 261% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.5714285714 20.6045352989 260% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.5714285714 5.45110844103 231% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424912066249 0.236089414692 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.230886478742 0.076458572812 302% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.187853536853 0.0737576698707 255% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25440175794 0.150856017488 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.240713047312 0.0645574589148 373% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.4 11.7677419355 241% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 58.1214874552 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 10.1575268817 224% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.97 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.0537634409 231% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 23.0 10.247311828 224% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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