Human activities have brought about a lot of devasting impacts on the environment. One such damage is on the wildlife wherein a lot of animals are on the brink of extinction and many others are endangered. Many factors are leading to this phenomenon but this situation can be dealt with by taking up certain initiatives.
The extinction of wild animals is a controversial issue in the world now, so there are many reasons for this problem. One of the significant factors leading to wildlife endangerment is deforestation. With the increase in population, there is a high demand for land and wood. To meet these needs, the forest lands are cleared to make them suitable for various activities like agriculture, timber extraction, construction, and so on. This would lead to the destruction of many creatures' natural habitat, leading to endangerment and ultimately extinction of many species. Apart from this, poaching is another activity, which puts the lives of many wild animals at risk. Many animals are killed illegally for various purposes like skin, fur, horns, medical usage, and high value in the market. This illegal wildlife trade also threatens the existence of many species putting them at the risk of extinction.
This alarming issue needs to be addressed immediately by adopting certain measures. As a measure to control deforestation, the government should create an awareness regarding the protection of wildlife and build wildlife reserves to prohibit human activities in such regions. This would aid to safeguard the natural habit of many animals and protect them from endangerment. In addition to this, there is also a need to stop poaching activities by taking stringent actions against those hunting animals illegally. A complete ban on wildlife trade can also help to discourage hunting, which would help protect the animal species from extinction.
In conclusion, the number of species, which are at the risk of extinction is on the rise. If this issue is not addressed immediately, it would affect the survival of many unique species.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, apart from, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2078313253 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92529742115 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509036144578 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1914180692 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.0555555556 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167007010884 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591414949147 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565965176908 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101293316688 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036913369495 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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