It is true that, in this contemporary era, new informations are being taken by people but it does not mean that we would not gain any acquaintance about our past. According to my perspective, learning or attaining some knowledge from our past events it is essential for us.
To start with, there are few points that why past values are necessary for us. Firstly, when we identify that we are totally wrong in this point in our past so definately we would improve ourselves in our present as well as future. Secondly, learning about histories of our country's as well as past culture it gives us satisfaction. Thirdly, we know that all things are done by our freedom fighters. We should know about them.
For example, first I had got only 4.5 bands in my writing but after that I started working hard on my writing skills and taken some experience from my past. In addition, that is why right now I am able to write anything without any single mistake.
Looking at the other view, we have lots of different knowledge and all things for learning. Furthermore, time is given by people for acquiring new skills and know about different technologies. It may be not good for learning about past in this modern era. For instance, when people would go for interview at that time companies would ask all the things related to current situations or knowledge rather than past.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly present knowledge is also important for all people because it is important for our present yet, we must understand that learning from past would always beneficial for us. We do not think to do our past mistake in our present. Moreover, we should take some knowledge about past as well. Past values are more essential than anything.
- Some people think that hard work helps in achieving Financial success while others think it is not the only thing which contributes to financial success Discuss both the views and give your opinion 56
- With the development of technology children are now living in a world that is completely different to what it was 50 years ago What problems do this cause for society and the family 73
- Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present Do you agree or disagree Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 56
- Many believe that living in a city offers greater benefits compared to life in the countryside To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Nowadays families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have become used to this Explain the reasons for this and discuss any possible effects it may have on society 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75247524752 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60290399248 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524752475248 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.1441031828 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7058823529 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9411764706 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211147815943 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863263249753 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563708695219 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130335695609 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625242238572 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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