write a letter to your friend s son on learning English as a second language share your experience of learning a foreign language highlight advantages and ask him to utilise the opportunity

Dear Sam,

I hope this letter will find you in good health ! Recently i met your mother, she was worried about you about choosing English as a second language. I would like to explain you how being a bilingual is a blessing in current seniorio.

However, learning a new language is not an easy task. Still i would suggest you to go ahead with this. Myriad of benefits are there in learning an additional language. For instance, helping you in communicate to numerous of people, increase confidance level, helping you in getting better jobs.

On the other hand, nevertheless, English is a one of the common language in the world. Therefore, it could help you to connect to the people all over the world whether they belong to any sector. In addition, when you are a student, it is very easy to learn new language as your mind is still developing.

According to my opinion, to make your future bright, you should go ahead with the learning of English language as a second language.

Thanks,
Mohsina

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sam, I hope this letter will find you in good...
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...will find you in good health ! Recently i met your mother, she was worried about ...
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Suggestion: Still,
...ing a new language is not an easy task. Still i would suggest you to go ahead with th...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...new language is not an easy task. Still i would suggest you to go ahead with this...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...anguage as a second language. Thanks, Mohsina
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, nevertheless, second, still, therefore, for instance, in addition, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80113636364 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59325111068 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5038514647 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 4.34317383033 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206344417806 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082574185616 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853265820263 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14482853828 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614494952026 0.0580467560999 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.