Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
People are pursuing the career field of their own choices that they are really passionate about it. Due to globalization, people are widely interconnected resulting in getting various career opportunities to pursue so that, few people think we have various choices available. However, I partially agree with the above statement of various choices available to us and this essay will discuss why.
We have various opportunities that we should utilize in our career growth and personality development. There are various job opportunities that people are becoming choice to pursue their respective career. People are doing their research about the respective field of their job and its growth prospects so they can advance in their fields. For instance, the Banking field was growing in 1990 however, its saturated growth people are shifting in the finance industry due to its growth opportunities. Students are currently getting varieties of subjects to study which they are interested in studying and want to pick up their careers. Students are becoming picky about which universities they want to study and in which job field they want to enter, so they can be helpful for their career growth. Overall, students decide on their own which subject and area they would like to study.
The above paragraph argument has its other sides. The growth of various industries has become saturated due to the recession. The recession has hit hard to various industries so people are losing their job and livelihood. For example, 100000 employee has been layoff due to the bankruptcy file by various companies in different industries. People are confused to be select their study fields and career. Due to the various opportunities available in the field of career and education, people are confused about which one to pick and which would help them grow. This is causing enormous confusion among the people.
To conclude, globalization has interconnected the world by providing us with various opportunities. This essay discussed the various opportunities available to us in field of the education and career and its other sides of choices are decreasing due to its saturated growth of various industries. In my opinion, yes, people are getting various opportunities to pursue their job fields and grow in their respected career as well as, students are getting various subjects and universities they would like to study, however, people are also confused to be picky which area and subject they would want to study and pursue a career along with people are layoffs from their job due to its saturated growth of industries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...zation, people are widely interconnected resulting in getting various career oppo...
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Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... become saturated due to the recession. The recession has hit hard to various indus...
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Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'employee' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'employees'.
Suggestion: employees
...job and livelihood. For example, 100000 employee has been layoff due to the bankruptcy f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, really, so, well, for example, for instance, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2201.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 422.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21563981043 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78917603087 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.390995260664 0.561755894193 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 667.8 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.9561563489 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.05 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112567565051 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483418137065 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479981667001 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988997780754 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661906113121 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.