The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps elucidate the state of the town center Islip in the current days and in the future. Overall, the most noticeable features added to the predicted maps are the construction of a dual carriageway and the increase of service infrastructures.
Regarding the current map, the main road is built along the center from the west to the east with estates such as shops and housing areas around. Specifically, the shops are developed in both north and south of the main road, next to a large area which is occupied for housing. This area is limited by a park and a school in the southeast and southwest, respectively. Both of these structures are connected to the main road by the two side roads.
In terms of the planned map, it can be obviously observed that the town center is covered by a circular road called a Dual carriageway. The center of the town would be developed for mere pedestrians instead of the staple road. Albeit the insignificant changes in the south of the apart from more housing areas and shrink in park’s size, the opposite situation is expected to illustrate in the north of the center. A large number of structures are predicted to construct in the future. Besides the shopping center in the middle of the parking area and bus station, a new housing area would be also introduced.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 415, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
... illustrate in the north of the center. A large number of structures are predicted to construct i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, regarding, so, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71739130435 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74300967541 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 334.8 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0850207024 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6363636364 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179196186568 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719682968915 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589880499976 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127199660014 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224384739643 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.