You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The first line graph illustrates average spending of UK citizen on sporting activities of their children whereas the second line graph depicts the count of children who played three different games namely Football, Athletics, and Swimming between 2008 to 2014. Unit are given in pounds for first one and millions for second one respectively.
Overall, the amount of spending showed a considerable steady growth from the start of the period to the end. In regards to the second line graph, while football was the most preferred sport throughout the period, Athletics was the lest played game a the beginning. However, Athletics gained popularity at the middle of the period and turned to be the second favorite activities at last.
given a close look at the first graph, British parent spent 20 pounds in 2008 for children's sports activities which increased steadily throughout the period and hit a pick of about 32 pounds at the end .
On the other hand, coming to the various types of sports children played, it was easily evident that most of the children preferred football and their number was around 8 million at the beginning and increased approximately 1 million in 2014. Conversely, Athletics was played by only 1 million in 2008. This figure was platued until 2010, after which it climbed sharply to reach at 5 million in 2012 and ultimately dropped slightly in 2014. In comparison to the other two games, the number of swimming was pretty stable of 2 to 3 millions throughout the whole period.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: Regarding; With regard to
...rom the start of the period to the end. In regards to the second line graph, while football w...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: a; the
...iod, Athletics was the lest played game a the beginning. However, Athletics gained po...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Given
... second favorite activities at last. given a close look at the first graph, Britis...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...hit a pick of about 32 pounds at the end . On the other hand, coming to the var...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, however, if, look, second, so, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 965.302439024 130% => OK
No of words: 253.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97628458498 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61951889166 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541501976285 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1829882168 43.030603864 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.9 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 5.23603664747 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23583983713 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853046298544 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771036540256 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150632931574 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643926772422 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: Regarding; With regard to
...rom the start of the period to the end. In regards to the second line graph, while football w...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: a; the
...iod, Athletics was the lest played game a the beginning. However, Athletics gained po...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Given
... second favorite activities at last. given a close look at the first graph, Britis...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...hit a pick of about 32 pounds at the end . On the other hand, coming to the var...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, however, if, look, second, so, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 965.302439024 130% => OK
No of words: 253.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97628458498 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61951889166 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541501976285 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1829882168 43.030603864 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.9 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 5.23603664747 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23583983713 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853046298544 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771036540256 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150632931574 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643926772422 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.