There is no denying the fact that occupation is of enormous importance in human beings lives. Nowadays, more masses leave their nation to do a good job in a foreign nation. although, they take their family with them there. However, I explain perspective views in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, it is no doubt that overseas countries give to work every educated people. Despite, having numerous benefit of leaving their country, there are multifarious pros for the individual lives. Apart from this, the student can neither do communication nor can learn other abilities, therefore they early years of their life to do found healing occupation and make good friends there. For instance, the overseas nations allow of occupation with give huge money regarding do work. Owing to this they feel over the moon in life with family. Hence, nowadays majority of people influenced by the facilities of the overseas countries.
Furthermore, it looks that tremendous people leave own country to compare to past, it has a plethora of causes which are faced by a human. However, it is fact that despite the superior bring up of children some are failed to yet succeed. The more education, the more opportunities. For example, in the modern era, people ate faced inflation problem in life, due to they want to more money. Instead of they went to another country since they found easily occupation than their own country.
To sum up, although there are multitudinous benefits to do work in a foreign country. In my perspective that but also our government not care about the poor people livelihood life, due to they are better to work in another country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
...n to do a good job in a foreign nation. although, they take their family with them there...
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Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n to do a good job in a foreign nation. although, they take their family with them there...
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Line 3, column 407, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d make good friends there. For instance, the overseas nations allow of occupation...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, apart from, for example, for instance, no doubt, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98916967509 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65745170248 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584837545126 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.334486717 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2941176471 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2941176471 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76470588235 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245731759399 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756339533591 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737551461966 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14579424579 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561884214899 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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