The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development
the diagram reveals information on the current and the planned development at the Islip town center.
from an overall perspective, there was a significant difference in the town would become more developed pedestrians-friendly.
the most change in the planned development is the construction of a ring road encompassing the whole city. This road will be a dual carriageway and it is going to significantly improve the connectivity in that part of the town
it is interesting to note that firstly, there is the main road which goes in East-West direction and there are shops on both sides of the road. secondly, In the South-East corner of the town, there is a park, which will be retained in the new development. The school in the southwest corner of the city center will be kept and connected to the park via a new road.
The current main road will be replaced by a pedestrian-only walkway through the center of the town. The Northside of the walkway will have a new bus station, shopping center, car park, and new housing. there was a similar trend in the pass of the south with shops
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...development at the Islip town center. from an overall perspective, there was a sig...
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...re are shops on both sides of the road. secondly, In the South-East corner of the town, ...
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...walkway through the center of the town. The Northside of the walkway will have a ne...
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...ping center, car park, and new housing. there was a similar trend in the pass of the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75263157895 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06585610951 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521052631579 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6057855731 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.333333333 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151728167881 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773681426611 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789998901966 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1135103937 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0873360824609 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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